tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3073616892373842917.post6442019797093592355..comments2017-11-20T15:03:49.740-08:00Comments on Room 2's Blog: above me poems from swimming sportsSunnyhills Schoolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00452503653068746385noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3073616892373842917.post-5848531917833501652013-02-19T23:32:13.351-08:002013-02-19T23:32:13.351-08:00I forgot to add my next part of the comment. I wo...I forgot to add my next part of the comment. I wonder how you could publish these using the iPad?<br /><br />Mrs PrescottSunnyhills Schoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00452503653068746385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3073616892373842917.post-71086253803335480832013-02-19T23:30:22.085-08:002013-02-19T23:30:22.085-08:00Well done room 2. I like how you have used simile...Well done room 2. I like how you have used similes to create a clearer picture in the reader's mind and you have used some great language too! Ka pai!! I was so busy entering all the times of the swimmers I only snatched moments of the races on the actual day. You all did so brilliantly and I was impressed with everyone's great behaviour. It was a fabulous day!<br /><br />I wonder how you felt as you were racing along in the water?<br /><br />Mrs Prescott<br /><br />Sunnyhills Schoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00452503653068746385noreply@blogger.com